Need to make sure the language is appropriate for Indonesian readers but still creative and engaging. Use descriptive language to set the scene during the night, the progression of events, and the resolution the next day.
Let me adjust according to your feedback. Need to make sure the language is appropriate
Keesokan paginya, suasana kantor dipenuhi gosip. Rina, setelah sadar dari tidur "sange", marahi stafnya secara berlebihan, terutama Maki Tomoda (nama fiktif rekan kerja asal Jepang-Indonesia). the progression of events